Meme: A Specific Thing You Liked About Something I Wrote

[rsadelle]

I like this one:

If you were asked to pick one scene, one line, one detail, one moment of some kind out of all the stories I've written and say "This, this, for whatever reason, I remember, this is something that struck home with me, that I wanted to keep," what would it be?

(I am bad at choosing one and picked six when I answered this for someone else.)