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As you may remember from my last two writing goals posts, I wrote a Gabe/Victoria babyfic for [livejournal.com profile] bandomrarepair. I've now finished it, and I'm looking for someone or multiple someones to beta read for me. If you're interested in reading the whole story or the sections I need special topics help with, leave a comment or email me. You'll get a chance to preview the story, credit in the author's note, and my eternal gratitude. There is a time constraint on this; I don't have my specific posting date yet, but they start next Monday.

Whole Story
The story is just under 37,000 words and has a couple of sex scenes. I'm mostly looking for someone to read it over for anything that seems odd or doesn't work.

Special Topics: Small Children
I have three scenes with small children in them that I would love to have someone who's familiar with small children read to see if they work for the age the children are. The three scenes together make up just over 3,000 words, so if you know about kids, you can read just this without taking up too much of your time. One scene has a child who's not quite four (three years and ten or eleven months), the second with a child who's two and a half, and the third with the first child when she's four and a half.

Special Topics: Spanish
I also have a couple of sections where Gabe speaks Spanish. I'd love to have someone who actually speaks Spanish read them through to make sure I haven't done anything horrendously wrong. This would only require you to read about 300 words.

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